"What a wonderful day!" Ahalya exlaimed as she walked outside for a bit of fresh air.
"Nothing could possibly go wrong!" she thought as she walked through the town.
Ahalya had a seemingly normal day. She did her chores, she worked in her garden, did some shopping. It was a beautiful, calm day. Her life was fantastic. In fact she thought she could live this way forever.
One day as she was wandering through the market she met this beautiful man Gautama. Well technically her dad met this wonderful man, but that did not matter to Ahalya. She thought he was great!
Time passed and soon enough Gautama and Ahalya were married in the most beautiful wedding across the land. Every member of the town admired her beautiful dress, and the wonderful flowers. Each woman wished that someday she too could experience such beauty.
Time persisted, and Ahalya and Gautama had a wonderful time together. His life was great, her life great, everything was great... except for her stalker Indra. Indra, you see had always been OBSESSED with Ahalya. He would never leave her alone! Even after she was married!
“Why can’t he understand that I love my husband!” thought Ahalya after the 15th call Indra made to her that day.
“I want to live in peace with my wonderful husband!”
Indra simply was not ever going to take no for an answer desperately he searched his mind to find a way for Ahalya to love him, the way he loved her.
“I've got it!” he said aloud, startling his cat. “I will disguise myself to be Gautama! It is a flawless plan!”
So off he went to Ahalya’s house, wearing a thick coat and a large hat. Luckily for him it was the middle of winter.
“I’m hooome!” Indra said as he walked into the kitchen.
“OH! I have missed you today!” said Ahalya as she planted a kiss on his cheek.
“This is working perfectly!!!” thought Indra as he continued his scheme of deceit.
“Why don’t you take off that coat?” said Ahalya “It’s warm in here!”
“OHHH no. I’m rather chilly.” said Indra in hopes not to blow his cover.
“Whatever.” She replied
The evening went on as they had dinner and prepared for bed. Indra could not believe this was working so well.
They were just getting into bed when….
“I’m hooome! Sorry I am la-…” began Gautama when he discovered this man in his bed.
“WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” Cried Gautama, “Where you about to SLEEP with him?!”
Ahalya had never been more confused. In walked her husband while she was with….
“INDRA!” she exclaimed.
“Get out!” cried Gautama, “You CHEATED on me.”
Off she went banished from her wonderful life to live in a cave. She was so lonely, and so depressed that she let herself go. In fact everyone who ever saw her said she began to look like the rocks she lived among….
|Image of Ahalya|
Author's Note: This story was inspired by Ahalya's Story, but from quite a different view point. Ahalya's story was a side story in Ramayan by Narayan of a woman who was turned into a stone after cheating on her husband Gutama with Indra. She was deceived by Indra, yet still punished to become a stone until Rama came across her. I chose to write about this story because it seemed like it was a bit of an unfair situation. While Ahalya eventually did realize that the man that claimed to be her husband was indeed Indra, she was still was tricked, and this story is a modernized dialogue of the story from her viewpoint. The original story was told from an omniscient viewpoint of sorts. There was not a vast amount of detail, and the style in which it was written had a “matter-of-fact” feel. To me, the story lacked emotion and personality so by adding dialogue between each of the characters, I hoped to make the story more relateable and personable. I changed a few facts, such as Ahalya actually turning into stone to ease the consequence. After all, cursed to be a stone for in indeterminate amount of time is a little harsh. I also added a bit of humor to the story in order to make it more interesting and fun.
Bibliography: Narayan, R. K. (1972) The Ramayana.